作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
My best friend is a girl and her name is LY. We became good friends since junior high school. She had very long hair and beautiful big eyes that time. She was very smart and did very well in Mathmatics and physicals. Lots of girls envied her because our math teacher liked her a lot, and obviously, all girls in the class agreed that the teacher was quite handsome. More than ten years have passed by, and we are still good friends, I sincerely wish we'll be good friends forever.