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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

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200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分44.5分
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文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文中词汇表达较熟练丰富度不够,但请检查文章的单词拼写;适当丰富句式。

用户练习作文:

conversation is very important between . it could solve many porblem.it is true that conversation could solve many porblem,but it dosen't follow that every kind of conversation is useful. there have two kinds of conversation.that is good coversation and bad conversation. bad conversation can not let you get what you want to show and may let things get worse. Good conversation could let otherone clearly get your meaning. what we should do? we should decrease the times of bad conversations and increase the times of good conversation. and how to get it? At first, if your bad conversation shows too many times,you should get a conclud after every conversation ended. to find why they didn't get what you want to say. was you speak quickly?was you did fouce the point? then when next time,you need pay attention on it. Second, if you are too shamy to tallk with others,you should try speak more in front of your familiar friend. then you could try to make more friend. Good conversation is better to our ralationship. we should pay more attention when they speaking,and catch the key meaning. It good to our conversation

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