语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分高级词汇,单词拼写也要仔细。
In the past all these years,the increasingly social media development has provide the space for public communication,but simultaneously also it can increase the phenomena by transmiting rumor and false news,which will distory public order in some extents to mislead people.Sometimes social media defame people following agression their privacy.The activity to against rumor have been devoloped quickly and Pbulic Bureau has arrested some people who were transmiting rumors on internet.The State Internet Information Office calls for some stars whose many fans are followed, should make an example on internet by sensible ways.As public roles, many of them have declared clearly that they will hignly self-discipline, strictly obeying the botton line for online comments.
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