2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

In the past all these years,the increasingly social media development has provide the space for public communication,but simultaneously also it can increase the phenomena by transmiting rumor and false news,which will destroy public order in some extents to mislead people.Sometimes social media defame people following aggression their privacy.The activity to against rumor have been devoloped quickly and Pbulic Bureau has arrested some people who were transmiting rumors on the internet.The State Internet Information Office calls for some stars whose many fans are followed, should make an example on the internet by sensible ways.As public roles, many of them have declared clearly that they will highly self-discipline, strictly obeying the botton line for online comments.