2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

可适当增加从句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇。

In the past all these years,the increasingly social media development having provided the space for public communication,but simultaneously also it can increase the phenomena by transmiting rumor and false news,which will destroy public order in some extents to mislead people.Sometimes social media defame people following aggression their privacy.The activity to against rumor has been developed quickly and Pbulic Bureau has arrested some people who were transmiting rumors on the internet.The State Internet Information Office calls for some stars whose many fans are followed, should make an example on the internet by sensible ways.As public roles, many of them have declared clearly that they will highly self-discipline, strictly obeying the bottom line for online comments.