题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章衔接手法恰当;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;部分高级词汇也能熟练使用,但文中有较多拼写错误。
As we all know, computer comes a part of human's daily life. It is used by engineering, discorving age-old culture or checking the cancer. In other hand, it plays a tool of entertainment, people paly the games or making friends to relaxe. So, it becomes more and more significant in the soceity. Some people argured that it could replace the statu of human beings in the further. Nevertheless, I think the idea is quiet negative. Just for reason that all of programs are be created by people, although it's really work high efficiency, it saves a lot of time and energy. And over the past years, a lots of scientists put various techniques to help human being. But none of them happend something threaten the people's life. So, computer just could becomes more and more convenice to deal with problem that people feel difficlut. Last but not the least, this is the fact we all know that a horse helps a man a lot runs faster than we, but it is only slave.