小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher. Recently there is a fresh teacher. I heard that her name is kelly. She is twenty,how young she is. Starting from today she will work at our school. She is very beautiful. Especially eyes and mouth. Her eyes are very black. Her mouth is very small. My classmate Rita said she likes cooking. I asked Rita that why she know this. Rita told me that kelly is her aunt. That's wonderful.