2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章衔接手法恰当；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活，但有个别拼写错误。

It is universally acknowledged that computer comes a part of human's daily life. It is used by engineering, discorving age-old culture or examining the cancer. In the other hand, it plays the part of a tool of entertainment, people paly the games or making friends relaxe. So, it becomes more and more significant in the society. Some people put forward a hypothesis that computer could replace the statu of human beings in the further. Nevertheless, I think the idea is quite negative. Just for the cause that all of programs are be created by people, although it's really higher efficiency than people do, it saves a lot of time and energy. Over the past years, a lot of scientists put various techniques to help human being. Nonetheless none of them appeared something threaten people's life. So, computer just could become more and more conveniency to solve problems that people feel difficlut. Last but not least， this is the fact we all know that a horse helps a man a lot runs faster than we, but it is only a slave.