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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13042
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly shown in the cartoon that communication is very important for us. It is a useful manner for us to send our information to each other rapidly. Then we can make right reflect in the first time. So, I think what we need is not only to communicate, but also to communicate effectively. First and foremost, effective communication means we express our views objectively. And no negative emotions in communication make us to know each other more correctly. Furthermore,if we obtain the valid information from it so that we could solve problems in right ways. At last, effective communication plays a good role to improve relationship. Briefly speaking, communicaion is a indispensable skill in our daily life. For examly, effective communication promote family harmony. A good team might appear when we do it. As Anne Morrow Lindbergh put it,"Good communication is as stimulating as black coffee, and just as hard to sleep after."

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