高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中从句数量过少；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

Many years ago, my hometown is surrounded by thick forest . The revier is clean and clear, the fishes are sporting on the lake. The houses in my village were used to be simple and humble,and the streets were narrow. People live in the peaceful place hard-working and make life. Year in and year out, everything is changing gradually. Along with high-rising building and large mansions continuously spring up. Nowdays, various transportations are running on the roading rapidly. Accompanying with the industrial development, our enviromental problems become more and more serious. The forest is disapearing as well as many animals Pollution treatment is extremely urgent.