高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

结构良好，但是语言不流畅；文中从句数量过少；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Many years ago, my hometown is surrounded by thick forest . The revier is clean and clear, the fishes are sporting on the lake. The houses in my village were used to be simple and humble,and the streets were narrow. People live in the peaceful place hard-working and make life. Year in and year out, everything is changing gradually. Along with high-rising building and large mansions continuously spring up. Nowdays, various transportation are running on the roading rapidly. Accompanying with the industrial development, our enviromental problems become more and more serious. The forest is disapearing as well as many animals Pollution treatment is extremely urgent.