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My new teacher teaches science. He’s very strong and has a big mouth, big ears, a pair of big eyes. He often wears black shirts and brown pants, with a pair of big shoes. My science teacher is very kind,and he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou.