小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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This is our house.It's nice and big!It's a warm place.All my family are living here. Ha!This is my parents'room,it's big.My father sit on this chair.My mother is sleeping on this bed.This is my room,it's big,too.It's name is "Ann's park" because it's very lovely and interesting.This is my desk,I do homework here every day.This is my bed.It's pink because pink is my favorite color.This is our sitting room.It's tidy.there are a table,four chairs,a TV set,a mat and a flower there.We often sing songs and watch TV here. This is our study room.It's smaller than the sitting room.there are many many wonderful books there.We are read books and newspapers there.This is our bathroom.It's big.We take baths,wash face and brush teeth here. Our house!Our warm house!I love you!