2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

Nowdays,we are living in a digital era.More and more digital products are coming into our life.Up to now,they have become a undivided part of our life.Except computer which is quite common in our life for the convinces it bring to us. In spite of the computer is a good helper in our life,it also result in amount of problems such as the computer games that thousands of students are addicted in it.The motivation of the inventor of computer games probably is entertainment rather than let us to be a captive of computer games. Furthermore,as the develop of computer technology people's ability is reducing,such as calculating ability and so on. However,computer is our helper in life and working but never should be our dominators.