正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
I have many teachers, among them my favorite teacher is Miss Li.She is a very good teacher. She is very young and her English is very good. She teaches us English every day.We have fun in her courses.She sings songs and plays games with us. We are so happy.And we learn English well. Our English are very good.So I like her very much. She likes reading and doing exercises. After class, Miss Li often do exercises with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much. This is my favorite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you? Do you have a good teacher, too?