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小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:40浏览次数:2399
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用英文描述下你最喜欢的老师.字数在100字以内
用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
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用户练习作文:

I have many teachers, among them my favorite teacher is Miss Li.She is a very good teacher. She is very young and her English is very good. She teaches us English every day.We have fun in her courses.She sings songs and plays games with us. We are so happy.And we learn English well. Our English are very good.So I like her very much.   She likes reading and doing exercises. After class, Miss Li often do exercises with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.   This is my favorite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you? Do you have a good teacher, too?

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