正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
I have a new friend.it is a dog whose name is Ming Ming.It is one year old.It is very cute.It's legs are short.it has a pair of big eyes and long ears,it is very small.It has a short tail.It likes eating bone and running.Sometimes It likes playing with ball.I like my pet very much.