题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays,we are living in a digital era.More and more digital products are coming into our life.Up to now,they have become an undivided part of our life.Especially for computer which is quite common in our life for the convinces it bring to us. In spite of the computer is a good helper in our life,it also results in amount of problems such as the computer games that thousands of students are addicted to it.The motivation of the computer games probably is entertainment rather than let us be a captive of computer games. Furthermore,with the development of computer technology people's ability is reducing,such as calculating ability and so on. However,computer is our helper in life and working but never should be our dominator.