小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog whose name is DuDu.DuDu is nine years old.Because DuDu likes eating meat so much so it is very fat.It often dress white coat.DuDu has a pair of big blue eyes and small ears. it's mouth is very shorty,Du Du is very smart,it likes playing games with me every day,I like my dog very much. Do you like it?