小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量。

There is a picture on my desk.This is a picture of Jim's family.This man is Jim's father.The woman who behind Jim is Jim's mother. They are teachers.The girl who sits near Jim's mother is Jim's sister.Her name is Kate Green. Jim and his sister are going to the same school. They are British.