加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强高级词汇的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Mar,25th, 2008 Sunday Sunny i got up very early this morning.After breakfast, i helped mom with housework. then i did my homework. My homework was very easy, so i did it well.In the afternoon, i played table tennis with my friend Ling Ling, we enjoyed ourselves very much.I watched tv with my parents and prepared for the next day's lesson at night. What a busy day!