正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章组织结构良好;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用。
My school is located next to the Qiandeng Lake in Guicheng.It is very beautiful.Do you know it?It is the Nanhai Experimental Primary School.I like my school very much. There is a big playground in my school.We have P.E. class on the playground and we often play sports there.Our classroom buildings are five stories high.My classroom is on the fifth floor.It is big and clean.The computer rooms are on the third floor.The library is on the second floor. There are many books in the library.I often read here.There are some music rooms and art rooms in the classroom buildings, too. The teachers in my school are very kind.The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.