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小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:53浏览次数:2103
要求:
用英语描述下自己的祖父,字数在100字以内.
用户的作文(系统评分56.5分
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文章衔接手法恰当;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒。

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My grandfather is a famous professor. He is over sixty years old now,but he is in good health and his hair is black.He is tall and handsome, and he looks like a gentleman.Believe it or not,he began to learn how to drive last year,and he drives every day now.   My grandfather has been taught English for about 35 years,and he has been to many countries, such as America, France and Canada. Now he is on holiday in Europe with my grandmother.   He loves me very much.

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