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My grandfather is a famous professor. He is over sixty years old now,but he is in good health and his hair is black.He is tall and handsome, and he looks like a gentleman.Believe it or not,he began to learn how to drive last year,and he drives every day now. My grandfather has been taught English for about 35 years,and he has been to many countries, such as America, France and Canada. Now he is on holiday in Europe with my grandmother. He loves me very much.