小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。

My father is very busy.He goes to work by subway every day.He teaches Math at school,he is good at teaching Math.In the afternoon, he eats lunch at school.After lunch, he reads newspaper.He goes home at 5:30.He eats dinner.Then, he takes shower in the evening. He watches TV at living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at 10:00.My father works hard. I like my father very much!