小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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When I grow up, I want to be an artist.I want to draw this wonderful world to everyone with my color pencils.　　 I did not know how to use the pencil to draw the picture for my mother and my father before.One day,I found that I could draw animals, people, mountains, seasons with the color pencils with teacher’s help.This is the reason why I want to be an artist. Even though i know it is very difficult to make my dream come true, I will make my efforts to study drawing hardly from now on. And then I think my dream will finally come true.