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I have a dog named tracy. It's very fat and seems lovely. It likes to follow me when I go to company every day. One day,it looks tired. I doubted that it caught a cold, and then I went to animal hospital. The doctor told me that it drinked too much water. Oh,my god. I should take care of it.