小学三年级英语作文:My school

丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏。

Our school is very beatiful,found in 1925 from an Amerian,there are six hurdards students in the school,there are a great playground,and many big classroom,many beatinful green path,students and teachers often for a walk in the green path.our school have a long history,there are 30 teachers ,includeing in langague,maths,art so on.