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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982[网页划词已开启]
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用。

用户练习作文:

" You are the person what you dressing, you are the person what you reading“. The proverb indicates that we can judge a person by his/her dressing, hobby, etc, but we cannot judge a person simply by his/ her appearance. People born in the world without the right to choose what he/she looks like. And the quality of a person is not decided by the appearance, but by the knowledge and intrinsic quality. A person with good quality is more respectable than a person with beautiful appearance. If a person is beautiful but he/she knows nothing, then he/she is just a fake vase which can be a decoration for a short time, but cannot be a real human being. Besides, there is nothing last forever, except good qualities and knowledge.Nowadays, many people pay too much attention on their appearance, but forget to improve their characteristics, as a result of this, when they get older and older, they will lose their attraction of other people. I always like to communicate with a educated person but not a good-looking person. I think an educated person can teach me many things with their knowledge, but a good-looking person gives me nothing. On the contrary, communicating with a good-looking person makes me tired.

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