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Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result: Tina is going to Beijing with her friends. She thinks it’s the capital of China. She wants to see the Great Wall. Because it’s very wonderful. She also wants to visit many beautiful places, like the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. She thinks they will have fun in Beijing. Jim plans to stay at home. After a period of nervous study, he was really tired.He plans to have a good rest and help his parents with housework. He thinks it makes them happy. In my opinion, I plan to make my holiday happy and meaningful. First of all, I am going to read a lot of books and make a good balance between study and rest. Secondly, it is necessary to visit my grandparents during my holiday. Besides, I am willing to be a volunteer in the Old People’s house. I can’t wait now.
