简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
This weekend I visited Beijing Wildlife Zoo where are many wild animals there.Visitors enjoyed themselves. They feed monkeys and played with tigers. Animals and people get on well with each other. We should treat them friendly. It is important to protect environment. We shouldn't litter in the zoo.Now everyone knows the importance of protecting the wildlife because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.