2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。

Nothing Succeeds without a strong will The strong will is an important part of success as it is evidenced again and again.If you have this desire,you would have reach to the succeeds. There is no doubt that the people who have would finish the greater mission.Do one thing,it just depends on fantasy and talking that never makes a difference.Because the different is filled with everywhere the whole of your life,thus both of things don't work.You have to some spiritual things which encourage you forward.It will be determined the vital of factor for someone's life condition,whether you have these of awareness or not.On the other hand,we should that develop those of thoughts from every aspect of life and to make it getting the charm in character.And then it would effect your mental with having experienced the previous life's experience growing.The ultimate it makes you reach the terminal by using those of special characters.