文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;结构不严谨,行文不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a dog named tracy. It's very fat and seems lovely. It likes to follow me when I go to company every day. One day,it looks tired. I doubted that it caught a cold, and then I went to animal hospital. The doctor told me that it ate my english book! I should take care of it. I don't know what to do