2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章衔接手法恰当；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；部分高级词汇也能熟练使用，但文中有较多拼写错误。

The science and the technology has created many things that had never been seen before. The computer is one example. Humans can not live without computers nowadays, while here also comes some trouble. We use computers everywhere around our lifes, as you see it in a bank, in a station, even in a store. To be honest, it has powerful magic to prove the efficieny in almost every banch with bringing entertaining to our lifes. Due to the powerful migic of it, many computer machine makers has been the most wealthy person in the world. Jobs, the most famous computer designer, the Apple company CEO, has thousands of fans around the word. Some problems are appearing recent years with the spread of lap tops and smart phones being a part of our lifes. Sometimes we feel that we are at the control of the computers, because it occupies to much time at our daliy life. I would like the computer to be a tools that help prove our life quality, but not to play a part of master in our lifes.