简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
How to protect environment With the developing of China,the population becomes biger and biger. As a result, pollution has be a serious problem. On the other side, the things we can use are becoming less and less. So we must do our best to protect our environment. As a student, what can we do to protect the environment? For example, we can save water, save electricity. You should turn off the lights when you leave room. Reuse paper, recycle and reduce rubbish. We should do those from now on.