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Caring for the Old Now with the devolepment of the society, there are more and more old men. As a result, how to care the old has became a serious problem. In one family, maybe the parents only have one child. So their son or daughter does not much time to look after them. In most time, the old can only live by themselves. They may feel very lonely. When they are ill, they can't be cared about all the time. What can we do about it? Firstly, I think the goverment should take actions to help and protect them. For example, the payment of hospital should be reduce. In that way, they can buy the medicine they need. Secondly, the children shoud show more love to their parents. We should usually make a call to them and visit them as many as possible. Everyone will be old, we should help the old so that the society will be more and more beatuiful.
