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Living in an age when the speed of live becomes faster and faster and the pressure becomes bigger and bigger, we must find a way to spend our lives for something that will outlast it. In my opinion, the first important value of our lives is making contributions to the social. As a student, the first job is study definitely that is a long road to learn technology and enrich ourselves so that we can give efforts to social, which is the best way to outlast our lives and realize the value of it. Nonetheless, not only working for social but also helping others is the greatest use of life. During my college life, I join in the Red Cross and spent weekends to go to bus station or hospital to share my love with people, which makes me satisfied when I give my hands and feel happy when others thanks for me sincerely. Last but not least, outlasting life we should have time to release ourselves, such as sporting to be more health, drawing and singing to release ourselves which are the way to make our lives colorful. There are so many methods to use life and make it outlast and meaningful, so find a way that suits you, and don't waste your life.
