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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者能较好的使用一些高级词汇，同时要避免个别拼写错误；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误。
we can saw a parent.writing a electronic evaloter to his son.the content is follow:dear andy ,how are you ?your mother and i are fine.we both miss you and hope you are doing well.we look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come downstairs for something to eat.mom and bad.it's obvious to expect that electronic commocation has been became popular and can replace face to face contact. as we known,today,more and more people study or work in other city.although the transport is very advanced，but face to face contact their parent have some difficult.first of all ,it will brake their schedule,they need more time to think that;second, it could affect their daily life ,some stident must spend some money to take bus or subway;finally,the pc ,phone is very advance,we can use it to chat with my family,such as QQ.so we can face my parent or friends,but they no more money in there. in summary,we known we can use electronic communication replace face to face,however,sometime you could back to home .such as your parent birthday or big event happen your family.
