高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

I used to live in a beautiful town where has a lot of trees.A river running through the town.You can see a number of fish swimming in the clean water.However,both streets and houses there were small and narrow.People worked hard all year long but it didn't improve their living standard. Now great changes have been taken place in my hometown.You can see lots of tall buildings, department stores and factories everywhere. Cars and buses are running in broad streets. But with the development of industry, pollution becoming more and more serious.Many trees have been cut, and fish have disappeared due to water pollution.Nevertheless,people have done their best to stop pollution and make the town more beautiful.