句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章层次较为清晰。
Football is one of my favorite sports. I felt in love with it by chance.I found a football on my way home one day. I was so curious about the little round ball that I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We keep in practice and compete in football games in order to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, Beckham is my favorite one.Because he is not only handsome but his skills that impress me a lot.i dreaming to be a professional football player in the future.