作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear George, I am glad to receive your letter.I’d like to tell you something about household hotels in my hometown.The household hotels are nice,because you can not only learn China clearly, but also you can feel at home by dining with the family for only 20 yuan a day. Of course you can cook by yourself if the dishes didn't satisfy you. It is really economical to live in a single room for 30 yuan a day and a double room for 20 yuan each. You can swimming in the sea, climbing the hill and working in the greenhouse without pay if you’d like. I'm looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua