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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第41篇:为什么学生会选择出国留学

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:00浏览次数:2811
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Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?

Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

很多学生会选择出国上大学。这是为什么呢?给出原因并作出解释。

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These days,It is very prevailing is to go abroad for a further education.Today,let me share some views about what I think. First of all,with the rapid development of economy,the relationships among countries are intensified.At the same time,many people don't want to stay in their countries for a life,and they reckon there are so many cultures in the world that they want to broad their horizons,know more custom and make many friends all around the world. Second,some subject or project is really a little weaker in their countries.For example,if you want to learn more about communism,you'd better go to republic in flesh.If you major in culture of east,so it's better for you to go to east.Therefore,the people who go abroad may want to learn better about his or her major. Last but not least,in many people's opinions,you will have more experiences and these special experiences may help you get a supiror job,higher incomes after your coming back home.Hence,a great number of students want to possess these by means of going abroad. Above all,these are my thoughts on why many students choose to attend schools outside their home countries.

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