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My hometown is a good place with long history and fantastic scenery. There are so many famous spots such as Zhaojun Village and Three Gorges Dam. Apparently,Those place worth to visit but not interesting. So I would like to take my friend to my home. My house was lo cated in a small town which was surrround by hills. We can enjoy the fresh air and fragrance of flowers all day , we can go hiking and swimming. In the evening, my mother will prepare rich dinner.
