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With the internet coming into society, our life has made an increasingly great change. The internet are now being used everywhere, whether in the government, in schools or business. We have good reason to say that internet is playing an increasing important role in our life; however, it absolutely results in some impacts, especially in the aspect of education. First of all, the Internet provides equal opportunities for all students, as long as they can get access to the Internet. In the traditional form of education, students who get higher marks in examination may enter a better school, and those who do not have to enter a relatively less good one. With the Internet, every student is provided with the same sources of education, so they can get equal opportunities to improve themselves. In that case, the good quality of education will be highly improved in our country. Secondly, nowadays, students can study though internet instead of the traditional ways by teachers. In this case, does it mean teachers will lost their jobs?The answer is definitely no. Because teachers can public their pedagogical instructions on the internet and this will in turn improve the educational quality of our country. Last but not least, internet provides more convenience for students. They can learn at any time they like and at the same time, saving a lot of time is another benefit. From what we have talked above, we make a conclusion that although the internet may have caused some bad effects; I still think the advantages it brings is more than disadvantages. We’d better make full use it to all fields of life.