作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
As we know, English has already become international language. It is widely used all over the world. However,many students find it hard to master.First of all,you should make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up.Secondly, it is effective to read English books loudly in the morning and remember the common words, phrases.Thirdly, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you meet some difficulties, you should turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.It is because all of us are making great progress every day.