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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中用词稍显贫乏；从句不足，简单句比重高；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Supplier Dear Supplier Dear Supplier Dear Supplier Recently I have visited your company in NewYork, I'm interested in your product 5670. it's very beautiful.Could you please send your price list and instruction to us for reference?We would like to establish business relationship with you. I wish you have a good day. Looking forward to your feedback! Thanks very much!
