作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear John, Thank you for your inviting me to have dinner at your home tomorrow evening.I'd like to come to your home,but I cannot come to have dinner tomorrow because I will be busy in preparing for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I am so sorry for it, and I hope that all of you have a good time. May i have an opportunity to meet you next time? Please don’t hesitate in calling me if you are available, I am expecting dating you some day. Yours, Li Hua