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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40866
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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As we can see from this cartoon,both of the two men need a boat simultaneously to helps themselves out. One will soon make a small boat by utilizing branches around him whose his decision is prompt made. But another one who is facing to the rest of the tree,is hesitating whether to make a boat by the same way or waiting for others rescue. So different two final result coming out,one will surely leave away compared with the thinker who only has an opportunity to leave. It makes a sense to us:A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. You should more take action to achieve it immediately than keep in heart its fantasy. Sometimes remote dream confuse you to think back constantly before you are more and more timidity so that to stagnate your pace. Instead of being charmed,when you separate small targets from your whole dream before you make a decision to complete each of its,then more and more close you reach for your dream. As the proverb goes:'how can you sweep the world if you don't even clean up your room'. Just as the boad-maker from this picture,he will sooner steer through the ocean reach for his successful coastline. Make yourself as a drop of water,and dripping for your aim,when it wears through this 'stone' then your dream is coming.

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