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Online Shopping With the rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is becoming more and more convenient in most of the cities. Online shopping is welcomed to most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumers, people needn't waste their precious time in going shopping in the supermarkets.They get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds. They don't have to pay rent and spend money on employees.However, there are still some disadvantages in online shopping. First,online shopping sometimes is reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain. It is undeniable that shopping on the Internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being cheated.