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湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:47浏览次数:2157[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an English composition on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题
3.你的建议
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

Online Shopping With the rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is becoming more and more convenient in most of the cities. Online shopping is welcomed to most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumers, people needn't waste their precious time in going shopping in the supermarkets.They get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds. They don't have to pay rent and spend money on employees.However, there are still some disadvantages in online shopping. First,online shopping sometimes is reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain. It is undeniable that shopping on the Internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being cheated.

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