文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Last weekend, fortunately,I got a chance to interview Kelly lam, a psychology professor, we talked about the Chinese students' opinion on sharing feelings. In China, more than 30% of the students are unwilling to share their feelings with others no matter they are delighted or worried. What's worse, the modern education we accepted doesn't make children know the importance of sharing. Professor Lam believes that sharing our feelings is so necessary today. Therefore,students should learn how to share their feelings, which is beneficial to their growth in the future.