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2011安徽考试书面表达试题及答案

发布时间:2013-06-06 18:11浏览次数:3428
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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

    注意: 词数不少于60.

    提示词: 游乐园   amusement park

                垃圾箱   bin


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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several ideas,such as going boating, climbing mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. Next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked by seeing there were many bottles and banana peels everywhere.Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. We were tired but happy.

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