可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
College is a special stage of our life,in which we should learn to master more and more professional knowledge.Meanwhile we have to adapt to the interim from school to society.So anumber of colleges encourage students to take paty in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. The school life is quite different from society activities.Therefore,to the start with,students can touch the true meaning of life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the brave to overcome difficulties.What is more,social activities allow us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience. In my opinion,as we see,social acyivities not only can improve our knowledges but also can sttl ourselves.It is a intangible husk.